Reviews for Unleashed
Kit-Kat Punk-lover chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
That was so deep and emotional and powerful that I feel the need to shed a tear. Your writing is spectacular and I encourage you to keep at it because it's absoulutly beautiful :)
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Jesus.

"Please excuse me while I throw up my innocence on the side of the road."

I'm broken-hearted right now after reading that.

"The monster that hids beneath." You described that perfectly, how someone pretends to be nice, builds up your trust, and then suddenly...everything goes so terribly wrong...

"Could I be whole again? Here, by the side of the road." I'm in tears, Faithless Juliet, a pool of fresh tears. Unfortunately, I can relate to this poem more than you know, and I'm so sorry for you and for myself for experiencing something like rape, but you know what? I thank you a thousand times for writing about it; I could never find the 'right' words...

~Isca
Colie Rae chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
This is moving and completely emotional. I don't know how you can drawn someone in that deeply with so few words. Great work.
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Well, in my random cruising of FP I kinda stumbled upon this and though it was written AGES ago I just had to say... fuckin' hell this was... powerful stuff. Something so tragic masked by beautiful words- the sheer emotional hurt conveyed in the first line and the child-like vulnerability of the last line was... well... heartbreaking.

-Thoughtful Silence.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I'm so sorry. This poem is so powerful, it's amazing.
Secrets.Within.Darkness chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
You portray youself very well..It must have been hard to write this
Kouichi chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
So very sad to hear such pain in the world to exists, it makes me so angry to hear of a person's feelings being used until they are bored and tear them down. Stay up, keep up and never forget to stand up.
thedarkestangelofall chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Wow. That was really good except you spelled "neddle" wrong. But good job keep it up!
bittersweet suicide chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
very deep. so much emotion...great job
VampireWinter chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
amazing. i can really feel the emotion put into this poem.
nadorj chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Wow amazing spectacular I love it I know some people who have been raped and now I know what it must feel like for them to go through something like that please keep wrighting you have a real talent and I only say that to a few people!
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
i love the begining. its very... it just like it is all i can say. great poem
Hrothgar-Son of Healfdene chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
wow. thats... wow... incredibaly powerful, my heart leaps out for you...
Dr3am3r chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
such a powerfull and emotional peomi hope none of this really happened but if it did i am really sorry.
Yuki Sasaki chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
So sad and beautiful... Very well done.

Thank you for the review.

-Yuki
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