Reviews for The Avis
AZG chapter 5 . 5/25/2003
Whoa, Wing has a pissy attitude! I love this story and it just keeps on getting better! UPDATE! (when you return of course) hope you got alot of writing done!
Clear Curse chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
As I mentioned previously, here's a book about genetically engineered "bird people."

As the Wind Blows

by James Patterson

Available at Spokane Valley Public Library
AZG chapter 3 . 4/27/2003
Now I want the next chapter! Revenge! yay!
AZG chapter 2 . 4/27/2003
Hey did you change this from when I last read it? Reall good, I love it!
AZG chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
So good! I can wait till the next chapter! Oh look, I dont have to! :)
CCLD-Blade chapter 3 . 4/25/2003
Amazing work! You've got me completly hooked. I look forward to more chapters; this is going on my favs life for sure!
Clear Curse chapter 2 . 4/21/2003
Hm! Very interesting. Me thinks someone has seen X-Men recently.

You could write a novel with he "mutant", racial hatred, theme. But be enough different from Stan Lee's 30 years of publishing X-men.

I know a title about "bird people" produced by ilegal genetic engineering. I'l look it up in my notes and send it to you. - CC
FireBringer chapter 2 . 4/21/2003
Aw. Good chapter. Update soon please!
FireBringer chapter 1 . 4/20/2003
Hey. Nice twist at the end there. Wasn't expecting it. Anyway, very good. Update soon?