|Reviews for All About You Part II|
| embersilence chapter 17 . 6/13/2005
-Squeaks- That was so frickin' cute and she ended up with the right guy! Ashton's definitely more hotter, sexier.. ;
Favorite character : Ashton
Favorite scene : The last scene in this chapter - " He pressed his forehead against mine, "Sophie," he crooned.
I shivered entirely involuntarily. Did he have to say my name that way? Igroaned, opening my eyes to find a world of pale blue.
Ashton dipped his head, kissing my neck, smiling as I trembled at his touch,"Let ‘em wait." "
Why you read this : I roam around the site looking for fics to read and I happened to stumble upon part one of this so I read it.. and then found part II and decided to read it since part I was so damn good.
Why you liked this, if you liked it : I like everything about it.. the characters rocks and the story line is just awesome. D
Anyways, the whole thing is just plain awesome. D Even in part 1, I kinda had a hunch that she and Dev wouldn't stay together.. since they just don't seem the type to stick together. Ashton was more compatible, really, he's always there for her and damn, Sophie needed someone good - which is Ashton. )
| Water Block chapter 17 . 6/12/2005
Favorite scene:As said last chapter-too many to name. I enjoyed the park scene where Sophie slaps Breigh. And the get together forever last couple of scens between Sophie and Ashton. *squeal! yay! happy. happy. happy!*
Why you read this: The story idea looked good. I debated with myself for awhile on whether or not to read this, Got bored one day, and started reading. I fell in love with it! Couldn't stop reading and reviewing (but you already know this!)
Why you liked this, if you liked it: It had a theme that has been done many times before-one I happen to be fond of when done right. Only problem is, it is Very, Very hard to find a story with this theme that is enjoyable. So, this was a real treat for me (and obviously many other readers!) You gave it originality. Some was a bit predictable, mainly due to common sense.
Why you didn’t like this, if you didn’t like it: If people didn't like this story, they were/are insane!
Thank You for a final time for writing such a wonderful story! I fell in love with the characters. You are too hard on yourself. You might think you didn't do your ideas justice, and maybe you didn't. But, either way, it was a great story, and you should think about publishing it. I really loved it. Thanks.
| water block chapter 16 . 6/12/2005
OH my GOD! I just about cried. I thought he wasn't coming back. But HE Did!
I loved the whole thing. I love so many characters, I will tell you in the order1: Sophie & Ashton (sweetie under bad boy exterior-yum! plus, how could you NOT love Sophie? OR Ashton? That's right, you couldn't!)
2: Ryan. HE was always there, and in the very beginning, before Ashton arrived, I wanted him and Sophie to be together. I never truly wanted that Devon relationship-I just knew I was resigned to the fate of it, or so it seemed
3: Devon. He wasn't always so bad.
4: Her friends-college buddies, and the girl with the party from high school
It is not possible to tell what my favorite scene is. right now, it is obviously this scene and the next one. *Squeal of Happiness!* There was just so much love of this story, all read in such a short time. *love*
Thank-You SOO MUCH! Awesome story!
| water block chapter 15 . 6/12/2005
The whole giving in, and being with eachother thing was good. So Ye to that. I just feel kind of apprehensive, becasue I am worried that Sophie will take it as a fluke, and get all upsaet and feel guilty, thinking that Ashton and Marsha are still together. She might withdraw, and refuse to see Ashton (if this happens, please God, let her friends force her to see/talk!)
anyway. Those are my fears concerning the consequences of this night.
yay! They got rid of John. Not that I particularly dislike him, he's just NOT Ashton. I Just KNEW it was him!
| water block chapter 14 . 6/12/2005
I just want it known that I hate pop-ups. But, I review anyway. Everytime I hit the review button, a pop-up appears, and it is irratating as hell.
Any-way. I kinda liked this chpater. I was worried for a second that she would cave to Devon. (relieved taht she didn't!) the whole 'stalker' type knowledge/speechpatterns at the cafe were cute, but creepy, too.
Bad, E-Vile Ashton! He is just trying to get over Sophie by dating his co-worker, by pushing her away! I think he should follow marsha's advice and admit how he feels!
f*sigh* going to read more now! Bye
| water block chapter 13 . 6/12/2005
I don't know what I want to happen to Devon. He has suffered, and if he really meant it, i guess death is a bit to extreme. I just know that i adamantly do NOT want he and Sophie back together.
I like Ashton so much because he has always been there for Sophie. He has had a hard life,(mom, marsha, etc.) and I just think they would be better together. I don't think he is capable of the blatant in-attention, thoughtless-ness, and hurtful ness that Devon has is just, well, great. He seems to have this complex where he feels the need to protect someone, (marsha AND sophie) but, he needs someone interesting, someone he can have confrontations with. If there is too much complacency and same-ness, it won't work (marsha, again as ex.) Like what they say, opposites attract!
HOW CAN ASHTON BE SO STUPID? "oh, she's in love with him. I couldn't be possibly tell her..." stupid!
| water block chapter 12 . 6/12/2005
OH my GOD! John did it! You said it in one of your author notes that John had to say something, something about sophie that she herself didn't know about, and...It IS him!
I want to watch family guy now, but...UHHG!
| water block chapter 11 . 6/12/2005
Oh, My GOD! (to quote janice from friends)
How could Ashton sleep with her? I mean, I felt bad when Sophie and Devon kissed, but the whole sex thing blow that out of the water. (I suppose that's why you did it, though)
It is so sad, that she got wasted and her first wasn't even with someone she knew/liked, and couldn't remember it.
Also, I bet I know who the guy is from the preview!
| water block chapter 10 . 6/12/2005
OOHH! FUn! He said it, he said it! "I want you" but then Sophie had to go and misunderstand him.
The preview was fun, but I am scared to read it now. (not enough to stop reading!)
| water block chapter 9 . 6/12/2005
Although I know this will have no impact on this story (it being already completed) but I always enjoyed the no-no third person snippets.
I like John, he seems sweet. But I am so TOTALLY rooting for Ashton.
I liked Ryan anyway, even though he chose Devon. I never really felt that he was consiously making the decision to abandon Sophit; its just he and Devon were best friends, and, yeah...
yay! Sophie knocked Devon speechless, even without her cool dress, and even though someone (who I suspect was his bride) was calling to him!
Flirty Sophie is much more fun that timid Sophie, btu both are great.
| water block chapter 8 . 6/12/2005
this was fun. Jon, the sex god, is interested in Sophie-aww, so cute!
And, yay, get to hear fun and embarrasing stories!
| Water Block chapter 7 . 6/12/2005
I really liked the shock effects in this chapter. Griffin seems pretty cool (is he ALSO crushing on Sophie?)
Sorry to hear that your AP US history experience was not pleasant. Actually, due to notes and tests (and work in general) my experience in that class was not that enjoyable, either. The only salvation was that my History teacher (for both AP US, and AP European history-same teacher) rocked, so he made the learning easier, and fun
I really am enjoying this sequal, and am so happy that she WIll end up with the correct person (but sad/angry that Devon is such a complete ass. I hope they humiliate him some how!)
| water block chapter 6 . 6/12/2005
I just got done watching "Ever After," and a line in this reminded me of a line in the movie:
"Um...so don't you think it's only fair that I get to find out what your weakness is?"
When he stopped he looked at me with those eyes and said to me with complete sincerity, "You."
Which is a fun little scene in both!
| Water Block chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
(just doing this to mark my place)
But also because I have a question.
Will we be seeing Devon, his slut LIsa, Marsha, or Ryan(esp. Ryan) in this story? I want Ashton to kick Devon's ass, and for him to be miserable, and Ryan to have deserted him! (harsh, but HEY! He was a bastard!)\Ohh! Thanks again for being great and finishing this story!
| Water bLock chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Thank God! I made a mistake! (see, I am SO willing to admit that, when wonderful, nicey-nice stories are involved!)
I would continue reading this 'nummy treat, but it is 3:54 am, and I have to get up and go to the laundro-mat in a few hours with parental unit and sister unit.
Yay!(to the story, not the early wakage!)