|Reviews for All About You Part II|
| Candescence chapter 10 . 6/13/2010
Sophie is so BLIND! If I were her I would've mauled Ashton already :) Haha, jk...
| chantra chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
love your story.
i read the first part first but i didn't read the last chapter.
devon is alright, it's not often that that kind of character is the lead...i mean, he's a bit simple-minded..hehe..but he's sweet and i'm sure there's some other girl that is good for her but Ashton's character just somehow overshadows his...
Ashton is just perfect..hehe..even in part 1 i really like him so i'm happy that part 2 was all about him and sophie..
i like sophie too..i like her name.."wisdom"...
she's good for Ashton..
and Ryan is great! he's a great friend. he actually knows when to say things and when to keep quiet and let things happen..
he's really great..i want a friend like him..
thanks for sharing the story.
| bloomsburry chapter 17 . 4/23/2010
I love your All About You the first part and this sequel. It made me cry. I felt sorry for Sophie in part one. I like Ashton better than Devon. He's a nice guy.
| Dwindling Fire chapter 17 . 3/8/2010
my favourite charactere was Ashton, no doubt. and i suprisingly liked the main girl, which i usually dont in some books because they make her totally insecure without a man...but you pulled it off xD
Cant say i had a fav scene, just that i loved it all, and all the parts when Ash would comfort her or be there for her or just say/think really adorable things
| Dwindling Fire chapter 10 . 3/7/2010
As sweet as John seems to be, i think its time for her to get with Ashton once and for all :L
| strawberrycrush chapter 17 . 1/12/2010
Favorite Character- Ashton..!
Favorite Scene- The waffle cone scene..
Why i liked the story- Because its likeable, lovely, beautiful, pretty, gorgeous, cliche, sappy, Epic, Gripping..also because i love Ashton..and for me Sophie and Devon were wrong for each other..because i like your writing style nd coz i could relate to the characters...!
Did i mention the story was awesome..?..wonderful..?..
Also, because i like Ryan...!..and Sophie..! :)
| omnomnomnom chapter 17 . 12/18/2009
Okay...i have to admit at first i was slightly pissed that she didn't have your happily ever after with Devon, because it seemed like they were the long, happy marriage with dozens of grandkids and stuff. But i loved this ending. And honestly i guess it's more realistic that her high school sweet heart wasn't the one...like sometimes it's meant to be, and sometimes it's not. But it made me feel better when Devon still loved her, but she realized that he was not good for her. And what can i sure her and Asher are just down right cute together. i can't believed he wrote one thousand letters to her! its too sweet. anyway great story!
| HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 17 . 12/10/2009
Oh my gosh. This is probably one of the best stories i've read! Sorry about the last review by the way, i didn't realise there was a part 2. I really love the ending, great story.
| joggi chapter 17 . 10/5/2009
AW the ending it so cute! XD loved the story! i don't really like drama, but i couldn't stop myself from reading this :D It was just so good! XD Hope you'll write another story soon! :)
- Love joggi
| psycho angel chapter 17 . 8/25/2009
That was so beautiful.
I really just love Ashton.
glad she ended up with him!
| ilovemangoes06 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I love this story. Much better than Part I, I think. Ashton is by far my favorite character, although I am a little surprised at how Devon turned out. I never really liked him that much though, so it's all good. Ryan's awesome too. Good job on the story! Definitely one of my favorites. :)
| TemptedByLaNuit chapter 7 . 7/25/2009
THANK YOU for bringing Ashton back! I was hoping you'd do that. Now, as long as she doesn't fall for Devon again, we're good to go.
I wish Ashton was real, *those* guys are hard to come by...
| Gris bray chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
hi i knw ur done with the story and all, but i jst had to tell u abt it. ur story is like the best story i've read in fictionpress. i really really enjoyed it. :D i like all ur characters.
i read 'All About you part 1' first though. :) i had fun reading that story too, but i have to admit i have been a die-hard Ashton ever since u first intoduced him in ur story. so i realy wanted an alternate ending, but i have to admit this is was the best ending one could hope for sophie and Ashton :)sometimes i have the feeling that relationships that start after 18 last longer than petty highschool relatioships most fo the time..
I started reading this story cause i am sucker for romance, but then after reading a few chapters and all that i realized that this story is diff from others..so i was totaly glued to it and finished it. And i like romance between two best frinds..cause it always turns out to form a stronger relationship when compared to others.
my fav charater has always been Ashton, i even like him more than shopie. i nevr like Devon that much anyway. heh sry.. Ashton is such an awesome character..sometimes he makes me wonder if ppl like him really do exist..
my fav sceen was when Ashton walked into sophie's appartment and herd her talking to ryan and asking him wat he thinks abt her chances with Ashton, and Ashton's misuderstanding about sophie liking ryan. :DD its my fav cause its really crazy how two ppl could knw eachother so well, for so long, and still not be able to detect their undying lve for eachother..
anyway, ur an awesome writer and i wish u good luck with all the other stories that u will be writing..:D
| 3DarkGoddess3 chapter 17 . 4/4/2009
One of my new top favorites. I loved it. They finally got together. Yipe! I love Ashton. Ryan is awesome too (gotta Love em). I really thought they were never going to get together and I am very glad that you wrote the sequel because I didn't think that she was right for Devon. She was always Ashton's!
| music-is-love10 chapter 17 . 3/30/2009
I just found this story, and at first I was a little confused with your characters because ( and you said this in one of your A/N's earlier) you made Devon look dumb and Sophie was just kind of..odd in my mind. (but, i've grown to love her). Also, I must say that over the course of this story your writing style has greatly improved, so just as i was about to give this story up, i decided to wait it out in hopes of it getting better. And get better it did! I can't pinpoint WHEN exactly your style changed and matured, but it did. Anyways, I am a HUGE Ashton/Sophie fan so I was THRILLED at this alternate ending (to be honest, in my mind its the ONLY ending). But, to answer your questions
Fav Character: Ashton (i love the bad boy character)
Favorite Scene: This one at the end.
Why I liked it: Because Sophie, though a little dramatic and odd was.. infectutious and i always wanted to know what her next move was going to be. I have to admit, I really didn't like the abuse she took from Breigh, but it made for an interesting plot line. But, above all, i liked it because i love ashton and sophie :)