Reviews for Love Me Twice
Special K Birmingham chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
The repetition of the last line is effective. I love "feral eyes". And "Blue-tinged hatred" gives a great picture in my mind.

The whole poem is harrowing yet beautiful at the same time; like something dying.

Keri
The Lady of Shallott chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Makes me think of Babydoll from Moulin Rouge.

Passionately written - wonderful!
xurbandecayx chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Norah... Ack... I love it. It's amazing, especially the last few lines. It kind of makes me sick, lol... :D

"Don't reverberate through

the poverty of our lives

Love me twice

Love me twice"

Amazing job, as always... Your's truly, x
Em chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
_ Deep. I love the repetition at the end.

-write more! and GO CANUCKS! -Emily
Em chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
_ Deep. I love the repetition at the end.

-write more! -Emily
Blu Wynd Faerie chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
You use such exceptional imagery here such as "blue-tinged hatred" and "the poverty of our lives." I love imagery, and it really reinforces the strength and pain of your message. Super job!