Reviews for Night Musings
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
What a beautiful poem.
Moni Jane chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
this made me really sad. :( But you're right, it does have a hospital feel to it. I could totally put together an image while reading this, which was awesome. THat's the best kind of poetry. May good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane
Essence of Reality chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Great job with the rhyme scheme.

Short and sweet.

_~ Great job.
absolute0 chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
Dark, gloomy, reminds me of the works of Poe. You have nice use of rhyme. I really like the last lines.
valpincon chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
splendid, splendid...dark and fable-like, a romanticism to its semi-formality that gives age and wisdom to a modern image...is great...:)I remember you, you used to write this wonderful Dracula fic before dissapeared up its ow backside and banned NC17 material...anway, you did - is that still online anywhere? finished even? :)
The Padre chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
Ah, this is beautiful. It flows so well, keeps its meaning and stance of demanding power. Although my writing style shows originality and abstract beauty... it lacks rhythmicity.

Check out 'Burn' from my collection, as I am sure you would enjoy it... Although I need to rewrite it, to even come remotely close to matching your poem.