Reviews for Below the Surface |
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![]() ![]() This poem made me very happy. |
![]() ![]() Amy, this is DEF one of my faves! The last line absolutely slaps you in the face after all whats been before! This is really great! I think everyone feels like that deep down where no one wants to look. A great poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, powerful ending, love the whole poem though, very heartfelt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool poem! Cool ending. I like your questions. Good job. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! i love this so0o0o0o0 much! it's very well writen, and paints many pictures in ones mind. makes me laugh, too...even though it's kind of sad. i love it :) keep writing ~misfit |