|Reviews for Breathe|
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
and Im left speechless!
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
This sent shivers down me for some reason.
It reminded me of the birth of a clone or of someone who will change the world, yet forces in the world arent quite sure if they are ready yet for it.
Very interesting piece... I liked it...I found it almost mind-bendnig... like you could write a piece from this.
| lyra-loves-you chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Wow. That was really psycic told my mom something along the lines of " a golden haired child will come into your life, and her gifts will include those from both sides of her family but also those of thers. "Which is pretty true.I have talents from both sides of the family, and have lernt a great deal from other people.*shrugs*.feel free to email xx
| celentia chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
this is a really good piece of poetry. i love the way it's sort of set in a hospital, and it's like your dieing, but thats what you want, because you think no one cares. and that the only reason the doctor wants you to live is so he can keep his job, but he doesn't really care about you. ive chanded my mind! it's an excillent piece of poetry! and i realise that i could have read the meaning wrong, but for me, i think everyone see's poetry a differnt way depending what mood their in, which is why i can read your poem over and over again! soory about the length of this review!
| Munchin chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Good question.. i like this piece.. it is written differently.. well done!
| kit feral chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
The formatting is weird and hard to read, but I know that's just FP messing it up. Just thought I would comment in case you wanted to go back and fix it or something- lol, that's the perfectionist in me speaking. NORMAL me says, "Wow!" The language in this was amazing! The ending lines were all great- especially the first two. And the last part was just amazing. I LOVED it. Perfect, or as close to perfect as possible. Wow. Keep up the GREAT work!
| Ravens Cross chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
The formatting here is a bit odd...paragraphs instead of stanza's but I am almost positive that it is because of the site. I had one that uploaded the same as well. As for the content of the poem...I like it! I love the imagry and your use of concrete words is awesome...fiery bedpost...I like that line alot! Great Job at getting your ideas to the page.~Ravens Cross
| stillbornangel chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
| FishFromOuterSpace chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
hey that was relly good.