Reviews for Sweet Child
Marie York chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
o.o This was so... I don't know, deep? It really captured the feelings like um... ooh I'm too shaky after reading this to type. You understand, ne?

~Taichi K. Hakubi

(The girl has lost her mind again! Lock her back in the padded room)
God Of Mischief chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
this is a very disturbing peice very very profound i love it, i also really liked the was you put the HE's and such stuff it makes you prejudiced against the men more and more i really liked this peice
FlyingPhish chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
That was great. I can really see the suffering in the woman and the borderline insanity that lurks in her mind. Her solution is not done through evil or anger but of love. It seems as if her husband is incapable of loving anything and by ending the child's suffering early before it matures and understands is much more merciful than to let it grow in a borken household. You are a very good poet.
locke huntsley chapter 1 . 4/21/2003

good. i like this. revenge can be sweet.

i wish i could say more, but i think this has to sit for a bit. it's sad that this happens to so many, though.
aleppine chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
This is a masterpiece. There's too much great stuff for me to sit here and ramble on about, so I won't bother unless you ask for feedback. Well done.