Reviews for White Brick
autumn berrington chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
well written work! it seems to be more of a story than poem but its great none the less.

D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
IHavePizza chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
I like it. I'm not 100% I like it but I like it. I'm espically captivated by the last two lines.
i-kill-4-fun chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Sleep-Not chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
You're not?
I beg to differ!
Soviet chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
I can see the emotion... but the poem doesn't make me feel the emotion... so in my mind this is mediocre
Finding Autumn chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
you're right, you're not a good writer.
you are a great writer, and it's your rebellions against the conventions of traditional writing as well as the subtle restraint of knowing when to cross the line that makes your work so beautiful. please keep writing.
quietdrama22 chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Sort of confusing,for me anyways, but if you really focus on thr poem... you get it. All in all, it is a good poem, very emotionful. Keep writing :
shortalee chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Tear...U go girl!
short chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
wow that is so sad!

Shows emothion. I liked it alot.