This poem is very nice, there's a wonderful flow and it creates a beautiful picture. Good job!

interesting.

and your right, it does have a stunningly beautiful imagery which gives a mature sense of shot but sweet. you combination of concepts such as angels and water was fabulous seening when most people *well me lol* think of water and angels we think purity. i hvae no diea which line i like the most, i love them all equally, kudos.

Oh, I like it! You're good at writing poetry. Keep it up!

I LIKE THIS POEM. ITS WRITTEN VERY NICELY.