Reviews for The Sands of Time
WhisperBlack chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
I liked this poem, i think, however, that your periodic rhyming detracted from what you were trying to say. I don't, I could be completely and utterly insane (it's even probable) but I tend to like more free-form poetry that really says what you want it to.

"it’s too hard for me to try and land

upon my feet they’re too weak and I can’t

see through all the

sand"

I loved this part because the rhythm and the words seemed to be what you're really talking about, and I got it.

Kudos to you!