Reviews for Just A Little Fantasy
mewlexi chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Haya, i finally got my account at last *yay* and this good...really good, infact in bright red now *nosebleed*!
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
bloody good!
hypocrite extrodinare chapter 2 . 5/29/2005
OMG! THATS AWESOME! dude... I'm going to go read the sequel now ;)
ItalianQT chapter 2 . 2/12/2005
Good story! : )
cariluv chapter 2 . 1/8/2005
Jaquard chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
O, not bad at all. Being a bit more descriptive would not hurt this story.
Blah chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
Neko chapter 2 . 7/8/2004
The story is great and ya a sequel is great! Let me go find it now lol _
Quip Clip chapter 2 . 6/26/2004
Um... hm. I hope you don't mind constructive cruticism, because I have a lot of it. Don't get me wrong, I liked your story, and I think you could be a good writer. But... you have a *lot* to work on. First off, your wording. It's just so hard to follow your story because of your choices of words and your grammar errors. If I were you, first I'd get a really, *really* good beta. I'll offer to help, but I think you need to entirely re-write your story. The idea is really good, but you need a few good pointers on simple grammar rules and a really good proofreader. Using spellcheck wouldn't hurt either.
Oh, and I don't know if you did it on purpose, but I was looking at your profile and noticed most of your stories have been uploaded 3 times. You might wanna fix that, because I'm sure it is really annoying for the FictionPress staff, and I think it's against the rules, too.
I'm gonna go read the sequel now, and let you know what I think of it. Maybe you'll have better grammar in it.
- Gretchen
graciee chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
DarkLove chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
girl i love it. please, please write a sequel. i want to know what happens. don't leave me hanging girl. keep up the good work. ttyl
watanasty chapter 2 . 8/8/2003
nice story
starsandstripes73 chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
write more...write more...a sequel...or just another chapter...but more...
Killer Tofu chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
My first femmeslash and yeah...
Marie chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Very sexy, I liked it alot. Keep writing :D
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