Reviews for Civil War Journal: Wesley Adam Shay
Billie Jean chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Fairly good start...some historical inaccuracy. The Union didn't have any other war goals (initially) when they went South to fight the "rebel seceders." Slavery didn't become an issue until 1863, after the Battle of Gettysburg.
FuckMeAlice chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Good history lesson, but I think you could have worked a little more on characterization. I think that Wesley will be more relatable if we know more about him and less about the Civil War.

Natali G. Williams chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
that's good! A lot of historical facts in, a lot of things that a lot of people either don't take the time to put in or research.
jojobear chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
Interesting beginning.