Oh this was very well written I hope to see more of your work in the future.

hey there, you! excellent story, beautiful imagery! note that while i SHOULD be studying for finals, i am really distracting myself, but this story was totally worth it! love ya! (p.s. you'd better know who this is!)

omg...babe that is so so so cool! i love it! Really andtruly love it. the pov was so cool and so was the description and i think you need to have another chapter cuz its so sad and you dont even know who she is and i want to know and now im just babbling but i dont care cuz that was just so wondrously beautiful...btw is he hot? tell me because i just got over my crush on that anime guy from angel sanctuary as i can no longer recall his name and now only have asher from anita blake to fantasize about so i need someone new. even if they;are in love with someone obviously very cool...hehehe. write more chica as you are one o the best writers around in edition to being so kick ass of aperson. smile.