Reviews for Drown Myself
LauraLizz007 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
i love the first stanza. great job! i also like the ending lines, they're very deep.

Rhapsody
not sure yet chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
interesting, i like the last stanza a lot, but favorite is the first, very sweet and good idea, muchly enjoyed it, excellent job
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Again, another beautiful poem of profound insight and moving visuals.

splashing for a surface.

Beautiful line. Complicated, sublime and deep. I line the emotional landscape you create with your words. Keep writing and posting.

Lowell
MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Intense.. nicely written.
Benjamin Gainsborough chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
good poem.