*swoons*
wonderful, so tender, delicate, breakable. i especially loved the last stanza, it was so effective, so loving...
"If I can just have this momment,
that would be enough for me." to be content in the smallest of beauties, is such an amazing thing...and it shows so much.
great work, kudos!

beautiful poem... makes me remember my ache for freedom... thank you.

lovely

very gentle and rhythmic, the words absolutley surround your mind, they definitely echoed in my head.

you have an interesting style, quite random and abrupt, but its very intriguing, makes it interesing.

"hold me in your arms, streak my hair" very sweet poem, nice. kudos

very powerful, love the imagery in this one, pretty intense and defintely kinda nightish feel to it, that makes no sense, i know, but whatever, awesome job

Wow! powerful and visually moving. I really love your opening stanza and the way you catch the warm fleeting glimpse of love that only the fortunate hold and savor. Thanks for posting.

Lowell

This sounds sweet and beautiful . Good job.

Very nice.