|Reviews for Disturbed|
| Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 12/16/2003
lovely poem, so strong, so depressing, angst at its best. very freeform, but it suited the poem so well, almost structureless, but it works.
although i adored this poem, and read it to bits because of its truth and emotion, i do hvae a few things to say...
using the word retarded...really broke the mood, its so harsh, so rash, quite shocking when you are embraced in this tender sadness and suddenly this word opos out...
AmI - i dont know whether this was intentional or not, for i saw it twice.
otherwise, i loved this poem to bits, so expressing. kudos!
| Pace chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
what does disturbed mean? do we just think diferently than others or is there something wrong w/ me? you can never be normal i dont even try anymore. i personally can't define normal. but i like this poem keep writing!
| Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Oh my God, this is so very beautiful and moving...I had tears in my eyes while reading it for I truly can relate to this situation you describe with these meaningful words! This is going to my fave's, if you like it or not *lol*
Really awesome job!
| Scarlet Diva chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
really moving. you're really talented. Thanks for reviewing my work.
| MelodyReiterLee chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Angsty... good job! Emotions are shown very well. Your use of the word "no" is very good. Great job! Write more. _
| Loganberry chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
I love it when writers play about with the format of their works, so this appealed to me straight away. Writing "AmI" as one word is something I haven't seen before, but it reflects rather well the way it might be said in the course of an anxious question - such as we have here. And, more obviously, the repetition of "No".
| Zechariah chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Wow - some very powerful words there. It's sad... I just love sad poems. Good job!
And thanks so much for reviewing my works!