Reviews for The Final Tear
Empty Eyes chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
some of the wording on the lines, is a little unclear, but that's ok. It's sad when the words I Love You can really hurt you. The repitition of some phrases works nicely in this as well. I don't think it would have worked if it was a longer work, then it's to sing songy, or something.
Davie Glass chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
i like your poem i just think that it may be easier to read if you structured it better...