Reviews for Neverending
Linnet chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
This is beautiful! The images are well-worded and stirring-I LOVE this poem.
Ebony Moonlight chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
That was so very elegent. The imagery was breath taking and the style was pleasent to read. Keep up the great work!
~The One and Only
Misty Woods chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
This is MARVELLOUS! Your descriptions are very vivid. They allowed me to picture the entire setting in my mind. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
The descriptions were as usually mesmerising. But more than the image you created of the house, the picture of the ocean was what was left in my heart and mind.


I hope you did well on your test.
Chinchuki chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
I must have liked it if I read the whole thing. I don't usually read long poems.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
This poem is absolutely beautiful. The description is wonderful and allows for some very powerful imagery. The rhyming always maintains the right pace and adds to the atmosphere of the poem. You have created an ideal place for one to escape too, if only in the mind, so well done. I'm adding this to my favourites. Keep writing, because you're very talented :)