|Reviews for Roman Enslavement|
| amazing chapter 23 . 12/22/2018
love the way it leads like that wouldve liked it to have just finished in one go but even better with more to read awesome!
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/26/2018
I didn't like lupus at all. What a jerk. No means no even if you are aroused. Many rape victims orgarm but it is still rape.
| DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 23 . 1/22/2016
I am thankful for her getting home before she did try to summon thanotos.
| mgaa chapter 22 . 7/6/2015
i really like it.. thank you for sharing
| heligirl96 chapter 23 . 3/13/2014
I loved it. I read all 22 chapters in one day. Cant wait to read Roman Enlightenment!
| RebeccaMonroe chapter 23 . 1/5/2014
VERY VERY good fiction! But i dont like the 22 th chapter !":( :( why this end ? I would love she married Lupus!
| A Latin Student chapter 16 . 6/10/2013
I'm enjoying the plot immensely, but I must say your Latin is completely off! I'm not sure if you're a Latin student yourself, but direct commands do not end in 'o' - that would be 'I am..' Verbs in direct commands should be imperative! I'm sorry to have to point that out, but know that I think the story itself is enjoyable.
| RandomCitizen chapter 17 . 3/2/2013
Sweet kid. Shame he's ancient Roman.
| RandomCitizen chapter 8 . 3/2/2013
Mental anguish can be considered worse. :P
| R. Ficst chapter 23 . 11/5/2012
I was so concerned when I started it because I saw it wasn't marked as "complete," and was last updated in '03. I usually prefer to only read complete stories, so I can read them all in one go, or within a couple of days. I decided to chance this one because it was on someone's favourites list, and looked interesting, but once I started, the further I read the more I knew *oh no, I'm going to regret this. When it inevitably stops, I'm going to regret this. oh I hope it's not a cliffhanger!*
But I got lucky!
Great writing, great characters, interesting plot and great work with the time change.
Now I'm off to check out your profile and see what's going on with the sequel/continuation!
Thanks so much for posting!
| CrimsonsNight chapter 19 . 7/25/2012
very heart breaking, i hope there is a happy ending.
| CrimsonsNight chapter 18 . 7/25/2012
this is foreboding a very sad ending and i hope that doesn't happen.
| CrimsonsNight chapter 17 . 7/25/2012
that was soo sweet i started crying! it was brilliant!
| CrimsonsNight chapter 16 . 7/25/2012
you are areally good writer...i love this story and the way you express things.
| CrimsonsNight chapter 15 . 7/25/2012
oh the innocence of children! i love how you have them interact! and the dialogue is fantastic.