Reviews for Roman Enslavement |
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![]() ![]() love the way it leads like that wouldve liked it to have just finished in one go but even better with more to read awesome! |
![]() ![]() I didn't like lupus at all. What a jerk. No means no even if you are aroused. Many rape victims orgarm but it is still rape. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am thankful for her getting home before she did try to summon thanotos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it.. thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. I read all 22 chapters in one day. Cant wait to read Roman Enlightenment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY VERY good fiction! But i dont like the 22 th chapter !":( :( why this end ? I would love she married Lupus! |
![]() ![]() I'm enjoying the plot immensely, but I must say your Latin is completely off! I'm not sure if you're a Latin student yourself, but direct commands do not end in 'o' - that would be 'I am..' Verbs in direct commands should be imperative! I'm sorry to have to point that out, but know that I think the story itself is enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() Sweet kid. Shame he's ancient Roman. |
![]() ![]() Mental anguish can be considered worse. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! I was so concerned when I started it because I saw it wasn't marked as "complete," and was last updated in '03. I usually prefer to only read complete stories, so I can read them all in one go, or within a couple of days. I decided to chance this one because it was on someone's favourites list, and looked interesting, but once I started, the further I read the more I knew *oh no, I'm going to regret this. When it inevitably stops, I'm going to regret this. oh I hope it's not a cliffhanger!* But I got lucky! _ Great writing, great characters, interesting plot and great work with the time change. Now I'm off to check out your profile and see what's going on with the sequel/continuation! Thanks so much for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very heart breaking, i hope there is a happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is foreboding a very sad ending and i hope that doesn't happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was soo sweet i started crying! it was brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are areally good writer...i love this story and the way you express things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh the innocence of children! i love how you have them interact! and the dialogue is fantastic. |