Reviews for Childhood Robbed
ku chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
hmm. probably the best thing you've written here so far.
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
I know! why must Parents, and News tell us all how horrable the world is? I mean like we REALLY ned to kow when we're three or four!
M3tal Dl2agon chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Nice poem! The way you write ur poems reminds me of one of my friends who writes poems. If I would try to write somthing like that, it would sound like crap lol. I suck at poems so much!

Shalott13 chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
So true, so true! And you described it so well! This is excellent.
Akiko Suzuki chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
liz89 chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
I love the way you use such strong words. They really grab you and make you pay attention.
Lorelei chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
This is really deep and true about what is going on around the world now days. You did a good job.
CaramelMacchiato chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
I can certainly agree that children are growing up too fast. This poem emphasises that fact well. I really liked the last paragraph ..."Minds once virgin to the ideas of violence and hate

Have now been raped

By news unthinkable." Good use of evocative metaphors and repetition. Keep writing and bringing the truth out there!
Blue SunriZe chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Aw, I like this poem It's so true. Today's youth are growing up so fast. I know first hand about that. I'm 16 going on 17 and feel old as hell. Good job, and when you have time, please come review some of my writings.
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
ah, nice this...pity about today's world...sigh...

InsomniacDahmer chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
This is dead-on perfect. I have nothing else to say.
Phantom Poet chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
So children have been forced to accept life's brutalities and burdens before they're even ready for it.
asdf34215 chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
That was really amazing, and I'm pretty sure you wrote it to coincide with current events and it really fit. It was depressing because it was the truth, or in other cases the truth that some are trying to hide from. All in all, amazing job. It was a great poem.
Shannon chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
Wow Jen! That poem was great. It is very sad to see that children can't have their childish innocence anymore.
Liz Tucker chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
I agree, its horrible how innocent children have to worry about walking outside in their own neighberhood.

Very powerful.

Read some of my stuff i would luv ur comments!
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