Reviews for The Risk
Love Child chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
You know what I would do is take that risk. I know that it might cause your friend some pain, but seriously if you think it would bring peace and love to your life go for it. Everybody deserves that. Go for it. Kiss her. I mean you never know. I hope I helped. Peace and Love dude!
KRistian chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
okay, if i didn't have a clue about who this is about and their status with guys, i would say go for it. That's what i did, and it landed me with the best Bf i've ever had. one kiss can change alot man :P
Peace Love Christine chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Hey, nice peom. I would take a risk, but if it destroys other relationships I wouldn't. I don't think. Since I don't have this problem I don't exactly know. Keep up the talented writing.
Butterfly chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Don't do it. Your heart isn't worth the risk. No matter what the cause or person. I don't care if she is the love of your life. DON'T DO IT! Love is not even really real so don't bs yourself.
Pedantic chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
i think this poem of your's was exceptional and full of meaning. you spoke ur heart well. i can't think of any guy pouring his heart out this way in a poem. but...if you, (if i may say) love or, if that is too strong of a word like this gir,l so much and know her pretty well, then i think u already know how she feels, but somehow u hope for it to change. maybe you should let her be, if u really like this girl, then you wouldn't cause her any pain. and to answer your question of taking the risk? i advice your against it. and i have a question for you! r u sure that it is Love?
Responding chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Which question do you want me to answer? I would push you away. But that's just because it is my nature. You already took the chance you speak of didn't you. If not, I don't recomend it. But I shouldn't have a say in whether you follow your heart and desires because I would normally tell you to do it, but since it is me I have a biased opinion. I am sorry that I put you in such a terrible and confusing state of mind. Now for the poem. I think it is a nice piece of work. Keep it up.
BigDumbRaccoon chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
I like this one, it reminds me of somethings from my past that no-one should hear, and my choice was not to love, however I ended up not being able to do that, so I think it might be a futile effort to not to try again unless you become a hermit or someone who avoids the world, but I think you'd be happier no matter what being in the world, b/c then u become lonely and bitter and well you never get the chance to really feel better.
AloneInTheDark chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
It is very good. I liked the part about Cupid and a shotgun, seems true. But the questions are difficult to answer.

But i was in a somewhat similar situation in August, if you remember. And i had choosen not to take that sort of risk. And i still wouldnt.

I am not certain you should take it either. All action has consequence. And i think you should sleep on it.