Reviews for Burns
Ruby Woo chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
I can relate to this well. I love the form of this piece. Clever without being pretentious.
Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
All fire does is consume, it can turn on anyone with no rhyme or reason.
content with rhyme chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
An interesting point of view here. Deffinately has much potential! I wrote a poem entitled 'Rage'. It has somewhat the same theme that this one has. Excellent work! Keep on writing! :o)
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Wow. Really beautiful poem. People who are prejudiced need to open their eyes.

Hate corrodes the vessel that carries it. We hurt only ourselves in the end.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
awesome piece! very well written. i really like your style and this format's cool. your eally have a way with words. i like this. good job! keep on writing! oh and btw, the answer to that riddle is "sinopo" (but actually, you gotta unscramble that, to make it a little harder ;P)
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
You're such a good writer - I've never seen such a flexible application of techniques... :o) Also your writing is so meaningful. Great! Keep them coming!

DW
The Black Rider chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Great imagery used here. Fire and hatred...excellent. Keep writing.
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
I'm totally blown off.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
True. Hate shall consume you as well.

Heart of the Sword
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Very powerful message on racism. I like. _ KoW...
tolvan chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
This poem is very good! I especially liked the last two last verses for the emotions they convey.
Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
very very cool format!

This is so good! You're great!

Thanks for writing cut Haiku.

i love the intense emotions in this one

vey raw emotions, very true feelings

great writing

I love the bravery of words in this poem

you're very talented!