|Reviews for Burns|
| Ruby Woo chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
I can relate to this well. I love the form of this piece. Clever without being pretentious.
| Lori Brennan chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
All fire does is consume, it can turn on anyone with no rhyme or reason.
| content with rhyme chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
An interesting point of view here. Deffinately has much potential! I wrote a poem entitled 'Rage'. It has somewhat the same theme that this one has. Excellent work! Keep on writing! :o)
| ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Wow. Really beautiful poem. People who are prejudiced need to open their eyes.
Hate corrodes the vessel that carries it. We hurt only ourselves in the end.
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
awesome piece! very well written. i really like your style and this format's cool. your eally have a way with words. i like this. good job! keep on writing! oh and btw, the answer to that riddle is "sinopo" (but actually, you gotta unscramble that, to make it a little harder ;P)
| ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
You're such a good writer - I've never seen such a flexible application of techniques... :o) Also your writing is so meaningful. Great! Keep them coming!
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Great imagery used here. Fire and hatred...excellent. Keep writing.
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
I'm totally blown off.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
True. Hate shall consume you as well.
Heart of the Sword
| Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Very powerful message on racism. I like. _ KoW...
| tolvan chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
This poem is very good! I especially liked the last two last verses for the emotions they convey.
| Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
very very cool format!
This is so good! You're great!
Thanks for writing cut Haiku.
i love the intense emotions in this one
vey raw emotions, very true feelings
I love the bravery of words in this poem
you're very talented!