Reviews for SelfPortrait
wingless chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
wow. this is really well written...and it reminds me so much of the relationship i have with my dad...which is ...messy...

well anyways great job
lighted eagle chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
this: "I felt so alone/Searching for the truth/I hated going home/Throughout my youth/I never understood/Why we fell apart/You were my first love/And you broke my heart"

and the last three lines are my've done a great job on this one...
BelovedMoon chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
That was sad, it reminded me of myself, good job.
ColorCrayons chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
that was REALLY good. i liked it a lot, keep up writing!