|Reviews for Prisoner|
| the light is green chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
"There’s no art in bloodstains
Just a perverted pleasure in feeling pain"
those lines are amazingly insightful. because it is just a weird pleasure in feeling pain...
it spoke to me.
| im not telling chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
| suicidel angel chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
interesting, it's a lot like a song, i like the rhyming, oh and ofcourse totally relate.
| lighted eagle chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
i think this would make a good punk rock song.
| lighted eagle chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
well i can totally relate to this...only you know me...when i cut, it all happens in my fantasy world...unless of course i feel smering blood on the wall..then you have to say hallo real world (for just a second, anyway) nice peom...i like it
| midnights shadow chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
Don't know what it means, but it does create a viseral reaction. I like it!
| Mystic Kiwi chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
way back when (2 weeks ago) when I was cutting, i felt exactly like this. Its really eerie. Great poem.
| wingless chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
this is really beautiful...is it a song?
i really like the line "Just a perverted pleasure in feeling pain" i like how you link pleasure and pain that way, its interesting
ill email u
| anon63 chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
hey, thats REALLY good! i'm so glad it rhymes. Dark, but good, you're goin on my favs! My favorite lines:
I want to need
I need to bleed
I need to hurt
To hurt in vain
I need to feel
Feel the pain
| Erotic Antibiotic chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
I love it, I know exactly how that feels...keep writing.