OMG.
This is absolutely amazing. I loved reading it and it's so heart renching.
Scarring... Nice term. I'll use it sometime. It's fantastic that you've the guts to write about something like that even it's 'almost true.' I've only just managed to start writing about things like that...
Well done. Keep writing...
Gemma Wilkinson
P.s. if you're wondering about how I found you- I searched for your name knowing the the NAGTY forum's you wrote. :)

enthralling, i can't wait for more. hurry with the next chapter!

write on,

Tenshi-