Reviews for Red Origami Swans
Rara Punk chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
This first chapter is so visual and intence emotions. Sad
I will have to read the rest later though - my younger sister wants to play on the computer and well I have been on here a while damm it!
Happy New Year by the way.
Saharian chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
This is soo pretty! I love it. I wish I could write like that! And in my poem: Hurt and Suicide I am talking about people who are your friends and then suddenly not and how betrayed and hurt that makes you feel and they don't even realize it, or a bf/gf who leaves you for no reason and the hurt and pain it makes you feel and sometimes it drives you to suicide. Yeah, its kind of a depressing poem. My friends got kinda mad when I wrote it and make me swear I would never commit suicide. But yeah, I love this poem and I wantedt to answer your question.
enigma chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Hey, dude I just read your story and despite the fact that she might read it i think that you should continue the story, in fact i think she must feel honoured that someone has such deep feelings for her as you do. So, please continue it, such a love story no longer exists or you hardly hear off nowadays. I am eager to read the remaining part of the story, so please keep writing and continue it

Cheers! :)
s-pannrada chapter 3 . 5/1/2003
I love it.
Peron chapter 3 . 4/30/2003
Ouch, and I thought I was harsh on myself.
Peron chapter 2 . 4/30/2003
Caffine good, coffee...only in Cappacino form. lol. That, was great.
Serafina chapter 2 . 4/30/2003
Wow! this is a wonderful story, you are obvioulsly a good writer.I wouldnt have guessed that all this really happened to you when i read your introduction about yourself. You seemed like the most happiest, cheefullest boy. It is a truely touching story. Welldone.
Susanita chapter 2 . 4/29/2003
OH Sammie, amazing how you make me smile, not sure if provoked by sadness or happiness. Either way it is the greatest of feelings. It's always a pleasure to read from you. That fluent and well detailed style of writing of yours makes me revive every single moment described and I also do wish things would have been different. But, hey, then it wouldn't have made such a great and tragic story, huh? And you know what?...I also keep my red origami swan
aleppine chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
p.s. about the other review? I meant free VERSE, not free HAND ... sorry ...