Post, post, post! Please tell me what happens!

Interesting! Please update!

Lord, this story is so well-written. Throughout the entire story, Andrea's pain is just tangible. Her suffering just envelopes the reader into this tear-stained fog. Beautiful story.

Alright. I can see that Anrea obviously is terribly affeted by Ashlynn's death, but why won't she divulge any info to the police? Can't she see that by being quiet, another friend could die? That Ian could kill Jan or Kaori? And that worst of all, that by being silent, Ian, the murderer of her friend, can walk free?
Great story. Usually I never wonder this much.

Sadness! Andrea's needs help.

Wow..powerful chapter. You always know it's a good angst chapter if you feel "ill" reading it(I hope you take the meaning of "ill" as in it's a believable, well written chapter, of course the rest of the story is too) :( BY the way, I like the chapter length not to short but not to long eaither.

Arrg! More, or I shall sic Capt. Jack on you! Good songs.

I like this story. It's neato. It's sad, though. Nobody should be in a relationship like that. It's so sad. Please continue. I want to see if he's brought to justice.

That's really good! I love the songs! Can't wait for an update. How long will it be? 28 pages?

Interesting... more! Oh yeah... next chapter!

Very interesting beginning, i will keep reading to find out what happens.

FUCKING FINISH IT!

This is really good so dar, write more soon please!

I love this story line its a really good idea.

Hey, Liz... What's with your author name? I don't think you realize how many stories are titled "Broken Pieces". It needs editing, of course. I think (if I do end up beta'ing this) that I will be more critical than I am of DML. Okey dokey, see ya achool.