|Reviews for Stars|
| A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
Ah! It's so cute...
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
The imagery's amazing! Gosh, I love all your haikus!
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
gorgeous. simply gorgeous.
| deaths counterfeit chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
lol, im listening to sugar suagr by the archies, ya know honey do do do do do do o sugar sugar do do do do do do...so it was quite a constrast to this beautiful poem and light years away from the bubblegumness which is the song. the feeling when i read this was one of gentlesness, the words you used such as stroke, and wisps, and whispers, the poems atmophere was very fragile and innocent, i loved it, kudos, you give the justice to the stars they deserve.
| lainxauber chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
That reminds me of a summer night. Falling asleep in my room with the fan on, the window open, the stars twinkling from between the full green branches of leaves on the trees, the crickets chirping, the fireflies blinking.
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
| Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
"Vaulted" sky, "cerulean gaze"... wow. I really got the soft feeling of night, reading this... "They stroke gentle clouds"... I love it. Beautiful.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
Lovely use of imagery...
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Amazing haiku. Extremely well-written. I love stars, hehe. Keep writing :)
| Kyalia chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Love it. I love anything relating to stars, especially anything well-written relating to stars- what I'm trying to say is that it's a really good piece.
| greenfroggies chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
Cool - i love it. I like all your stuff but this especially
| wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
hm have I reviewed this yet?
Its really good. makes me want to go to sleep, and yes that means it is good.
| Mime chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
. What a peaceful haiku!
| charredrose chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
i like it! pixies are pretty. keep writing!
| Loveliveshere chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
) this was good, i liked your choice of words. the beginning (my favorite part) gives a very good description, and the second part gives a sense of comfort, i love it ) all in all, very nice, and btw...i think it should be "whisper" not whispers?