You are really gifted! Keep it up ok? Will be looking forward to read all of your work...

wow you've got really nice work here. Wow! Talent!

amen to that

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I love this, and the much bigger idea behind it. Gaining control of thoughts, dreams, ideas etc, to induce calm - great. I also liked the use of repetition of the title and of 'I am a storm' (or similar). Wish I could R&R more, but I'd better go away now to last-minute-cram capacitors and quantum into my head. But I will be back ... if you're sitting the exam tomorrow, all the best.

Reminds me of myself(The first part of my name mean Wind), yet i am in control, barely

I love that. The idea of neding to control the storm within yourself is so cool. And it's true. I felt just like that last night, 'though I couldn't have possibly portrayed it in words as well as you.