Reviews for Beautiful
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
a masterpiece.
bloodyvelvetstrings chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
This one made me cry. It has a special meaning... I loved it! Really I did.
Evil Cheshire chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
So beautifully written, it flowed extremely well, good job keep writing!
Sammy- B chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
wow- I know exactly how you feel. Good job!
Cats Game chapter 1 . 3/21/2004
Thank you so much for your reviews... every comment is appreciated.
This poem in it's tital is beautiful. My favorite line is:
Some hearts are made of music.
Yours was laughter.
I know someone very close to me that fits the description you laid out in this poem of fleeting looks and lasting beauty. It seems to me that what you are telling us is that beauty isn't in the eye of the beholder, but that there is beauty in everything. Not just looks, but life itself. nicely done.
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
The last line brought the whole thing completely together and made it that much more perfect and beautiful. Keep Writing
Calypso chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
That last line surprised me, and it made the poem incredibly powerful. Absolutely lovely.