|Reviews for All Alone|
| Skye Hegyes chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I think the wife was a B*. At least she could have said why she was leaving. I like the poem though and whatever you think, its not half bad. I am not just being nice. I don't review what I don't like... Heck! Half the time I don't finish reading what I don't like! I like this though!
| orangefreak33 chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
That's so sad...aw. The rhyming seems forced at times. And it should be bear, not bare.
| mapofyourhead chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
Good poem. Very nice job. *applause*
| Friday Evening chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
It gave me goosebumps in the end! Nice writing- keep it up :)
| coolhead15 chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Good, good! Keep writing!
| Animagess chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
Interesting concept... Would've been even better if the reader never found out what happened with the wife and all. Could've just been a little spot of needless paranoia. Hm...
| Soviet chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
oopps... I though I reviewed it when it just came out.. oops... srry ice_wolf
Well... it's a great poem, I love it... although I would rearange a couple of things...
Btw... update... Griffon's Decision
| Mystress Tate chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Hey! I really like this poem! It's great! I can't wait to read anything else you've written. You're a very talented writer, and I hope you continue to write in the future.