Reviews for All Alone
Skye Hegyes chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I think the wife was a B*. At least she could have said why she was leaving. I like the poem though and whatever you think, its not half bad. I am not just being nice. I don't review what I don't like... Heck! Half the time I don't finish reading what I don't like! I like this though!

Skye
orangefreak33 chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
That's so sad...aw. The rhyming seems forced at times. And it should be bear, not bare.
mapofyourhead chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
Good poem. Very nice job. *applause*

*SableTrumpetress
Friday Evening chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
It gave me goosebumps in the end! Nice writing- keep it up :)
coolhead15 chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Good, good! Keep writing!
Animagess chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
Interesting concept... Would've been even better if the reader never found out what happened with the wife and all. Could've just been a little spot of needless paranoia. Hm...
Soviet chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
oopps... I though I reviewed it when it just came out.. oops... srry ice_wolf

Well... it's a great poem, I love it... although I would rearange a couple of things...

Btw... update... Griffon's Decision
Mystress Tate chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Hey! I really like this poem! It's great! I can't wait to read anything else you've written. You're a very talented writer, and I hope you continue to write in the future.

Yours Truly,

Mystress Tate