Reviews for graduation speaker and what to do about it
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
well written and very interesting.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
oh my GOD. this is... beautiful. i'm sorry. SO empathic, raw, real, hopeless, helpless, cathartic & the last line... i would sleep with that last line.

i believe

the best way to do THIS would

be for all of us to beat the hell out

of one another so we would not be

sequestered beneath pianowire grins
whoey chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
OH my GAWD! I swear, the band looped our graduation song, you know, da-dadadum-da-da-da-dadadum-da-da
I would've killed someone if they didn't all sit down wherever they were at coz goddmnit I never wanna hear that frickin sht one more time!
sigh, and don't even try to tell me about the morons who spoke...geh
needless to say, I fucking hated fucking graduation.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
wow. this is powerful. sort of sad,


certainly, and is that a hint of

Premature Nostalgia

I see hidden between the words?

(I love the imagery)

"at least the grass would

be trampled underfoot."


Numena chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
This is good. Nothing else to say.