Reviews for Hello, Goodbye
la bonne annee chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
This is a very good short story, something many people can relate to. I liked your description of the person's smile lighting up the room, and giving life to those around, etc. That created a clear image in my mind of what the narrator was seeing. It it a bit depressing, though, innit? The narrator seems a bit off-balance, but hey, if it love, who wouldn't be?
katmonkey chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
This is really good. Are you gonna continue?
PS 'I Capture The Castle' IS a real book and it's also a real movie!
FloridaFlowerVLM chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
I love this one!
VivanLasMariposas chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
So sweet. So sad. I've been there many times before.
cricket chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
BAD WORD! you wrote a BAD WORD! well just letting you know. tootles
FamousOneLiners chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
I can definetly relate, please update
manda elle chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
good. i like it, please continue!
Heather chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
You are very good at expressing emotion. I could relate to your writing too. Great job!
lucy chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
hm. interesting. i'll tell you wha i told the last person i read- youre mixing two kinds of writing: wierd and detahed, the detailed kind. your echunks about 'hello, etc..." is all random, thats good. youre good at that. but then you bring in other stuff, like all discrpitive abotut he eyes, it just doesnt seem right in your poem/thing. sorry if thats confusing. :))