Reviews for Letters: Dear Love, Yours sincerely, Death
Person chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very

very

cute.

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Person chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very

very

cute.

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!
Person chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very

very

cute.

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!
Person chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very

very

cute.

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!
Person chapter 2 . 5/6/2003
Very

very

cute.

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!
Person chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
A ok...

I

do

not

get

it...

I

do

not

get

it...

Just

kidding!

Cool.
hurtmushroom chapter 2 . 5/4/2003
"And would you not die once more just to live one moment all again?"

Just so cool! Can't really say anything else, this is so great!

cio, hoellenwauwau
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Wow, that's such a cool idea! Don't think it's morbid, but then my humor is kinda strange...

Anyway, it's just cool! I loved the line "where love is a fate worse than death" (though I can't quite agree at the moment *g*), it just sounds extremely cool!

cio, hoellenwauwau
glitterjewele chapter 2 . 5/1/2003
lol i agree whole-heartedly: yay you for the quick update! that was superb! even better than the first one, i think! it flowed really, really well this time around. there were some FANTASTIC images in here *scrolls back up the page so as not to forget anything* okay here goes: "sweet with irony and despair," "your fingerprints imbedded on its blade," "dismiss my bliss so flippantly, and abandon it upon a darkened shelf," "feelings of such bittersweet ecstasy," "you would die a thousand times more/just to feel that peace and see her face," "every time you see a more pure light you see a blacker darkness," "i am a new death," "would you tell me to my face 'it wasn't worth the pain'/and would you not die once more just to live one moment again?'" *shivers!* "i may be reality's knife . . . but if it hadn't been me it would have been lonliness's noose" (AWESOME contrast). *ehem* so yes, gorgeous chapter, do so hope you keep it going, i'm lovin this! incredible work as always, chica! KUDOS! ! !
Isay chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Beautiful... *sniff*

~Isay
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
this is fantastic! loved it! i do so hope you make it a series! great job personifying love and death throughout the piece. really enjoyed the way you created death's voice. it got better and better as the letter wore on. some of my favorite segments: "Through the years I've torn your work/slashed those intricate spells," "channel the living toward the abyss," "I corrupted the meaning of you," "dragging the victim beneath your sweet surface," "you're your own enemy when seen in the light," "that cold hell you rein over, that breathing orb called earth" "love is a fate worse than death," "invisible wounds/you're so called 'bliss' inflicted," "they reach for that invisible knife . . . until they can endure no more and reach for reality's knife," and "sweet dreams" made for a simply chilling conclusion. i thoroughly enjoyed this. do keep adding to it, chica! kudos!
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Wow. I sit amazed. That was wonderful. The rhyme seemed effortless and it flowed without a meter, if that makes any sense. I love the idea and would love if you continued it. winged one
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Bravo! You've expressed yourself very well. I like it.
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