Reviews for I Shouldn't Have to Know
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
I know what you mean. From one Israeli to another. You made me cry again! Well I've been crying a lot lately.
I miss Louie...
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This is one of my favorite poems so far... I really like the "just have to grow" part at the end. very good job.
n o c t u r n e chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
The usage of rhyming's very effective, I'm very very impressed because rhyming is not something I can do very well. Excellent! I love it alot!
strongwind chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
i finally got around to r&r this. needless to say it was terific as usuall.

love,
becca chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Hey, I'm a friend of KayWest's and was just looking on her favorite story page.. I really liked this, and I loved the way you repeated certain phrases, emphasizing the importantance of them. You used that technique extremely well, good job and congrats.

-becca
Savak chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Wow. Magnificent. I really feel like this all the time. ::pat pat::
Incrys chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
I can't believe no one else has reviewed this yet. I am sure many people have felt the exact same thing at some point or other (Heaven knows I have). It was extremely well-written, the rhythem was excellent, and the over-all content was amazing. Keep writing )