Reviews for Opening You
strongwind chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
wow- this is amazing- i cant belive i never read it before. and i think i know what you mean. ah...
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
I thought that violence never helps, but I can see your perspective when you wrote this poem. I still don't think hurting people helps, but I can see why someone might think it. Good poem.
y chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
D...
*hugs you*
-y.
(somtimes words just say too little.)
Lady Ariel chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
I like the last lines of this, very meaningful.

I was just reading your review again, and you said how I skipped all the heartfelt ones of yours... and I think you reviewed one of my more sarcastic ones, too. xD I wouldn't exactly say that Through Jealousy Comes Understanding is very heartfelt... so just a note, maybe Inside, Outside or ...::Realizes that she has another poem to put on:: Ep!

Escuse me while I do that. ;

By the way, great poem!

-Britt
Keighan Moureau chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Great poem. It's easy to tell you really put your heart in this. Like I'm sure you do with the rest of your work. You're a great poet.
June Augustine chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Very good! Like poetry that I could never write!

Keep writing!

June

PS thanks for your review of my poem!