Reviews for Sunny Standing
Avory chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Beautiful. Everything is just beautiful: diction, expression, rhythm. You are incredible!
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This one is fantastic. It is so... I can't really describe it. Amazing job. Especially the "her face is like an old clock"... that one is really good.
strongwind chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
wow i can't belive i haven't reveiwed this before!
this was absulutly amazing!(can't spell...)
anyway- wow!
i love the lines:do you think the dark that enslaved her is all but a question of who?
and the two lines before that too.
and the rest of the song.
and you are very nice yourself.
Kezarahk chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Like the story-poem style, and like the bits about "wants to be there"; it makes the poem more... complex, than a simple angst session.
cinnamin girl chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
wow.. reminds me of one of my fave songs, called sunny came home.. perhaps we all have to save sunny...