|Reviews for Torn|
| Your Execution chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Its odd but still good.
| Silver Daratraz chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
um...okay. Wierd. tha's all ah'll say 'bout thi'. *smiles*
| Natasha chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Kind of has a Sid/Nancy feel to it.. I agree, sick, twisted, and genius. Amazing. I love this depressing stuff. You have a real talent for this..Love you,Tasha X
| yabureta tsubasa chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
...Oh my god. ...*speechless of 50 different sorts* That's...scary but a scary kind of amazing, as well. *patpat* Suki desu.
| Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
believe me I know what you mean. I write short stories like that. Twisted ideas that seem to just pop into your head. Yours was twisted but in a really good way!
| T Bond chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Quite short, yet quite good
| R. Blade chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
completely awesome. i dont know why you dont like it. its great! one of my favs! check my stuff out if you wish. thanx! keep writing!
| Cannibalistic Smurf chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
I have to agrea with your friends that said it was sick and genius (eh, whats thye difference?)even though it could be a lot better, I think its good in its own way.
| I Zombie chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Actually, it's not that bad, considering you just kind of whipped it up out of nowhere.
You should work on it some and see how it turns out.
| Black Heart chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
*gapes* Whoa! So much red...I feel as though all I can see in front of me as I read this is red. Death-I feel like it is staring me in the face, almost in a frightening way. Though I am not sure who died in this-was it the person who wanted to die, or the person who could not bring him/herself to slash the one he/she loves? Perhaps you will clarify that in the next chapter...?
As for this coming out when you were bored-many great things surface when one is bored.
| gothickowgrrl chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Fascinating...but then agian that's just my worthless opinion floating away with my soul to a dark, empty corner to hide and plan revenge...please read and review my poems...