Its odd but still good.

um...okay. Wierd. tha's all ah'll say 'bout thi'. *smiles*

Kind of has a Sid/Nancy feel to it.. I agree, sick, twisted, and genius. Amazing. I love this depressing stuff. You have a real talent for this..Love you,Tasha X

...Oh my god. ...*speechless of 50 different sorts* That's...scary but a scary kind of amazing, as well. *patpat* Suki desu.

believe me I know what you mean. I write short stories like that. Twisted ideas that seem to just pop into your head. Yours was twisted but in a really good way!

Quite short, yet quite good

completely awesome. i dont know why you dont like it. its great! one of my favs! check my stuff out if you wish. thanx! keep writing!

~scars~

I have to agrea with your friends that said it was sick and genius (eh, whats thye difference?)even though it could be a lot better, I think its good in its own way.

Actually, it's not that bad, considering you just kind of whipped it up out of nowhere.

You should work on it some and see how it turns out.

*gapes* Whoa! So much red...I feel as though all I can see in front of me as I read this is red. Death-I feel like it is staring me in the face, almost in a frightening way. Though I am not sure who died in this-was it the person who wanted to die, or the person who could not bring him/herself to slash the one he/she loves? Perhaps you will clarify that in the next chapter...?

As for this coming out when you were bored-many great things surface when one is bored.

Fascinating...but then agian that's just my worthless opinion floating away with my soul to a dark, empty corner to hide and plan revenge...please read and review my poems...