HEY! I care if this is on hiatus! THis is my favorite of your stories too, and I really want it UPDATED!

You know what you might need to change the summary. No offense but it kinda sux... When the fic just came out I took one look at thought I am not reading it. Yah know maybe you could pick a good peice from the story and use it as you summary.

You deserve much more reviews than this. I have read sucky stories with a lot more reviews!

I feel kinda sorry for Krantz, I love this story!

Lmao he knows the guy is a dude that's funny.

It's great so far.

I LOVE THIS! Beleila (is that how u spell it?) is tite~ i lyk Vermilion.. but.. isn't he a dragon? so shouldn't he be disturbed by the fact that Keziah came to slay the dragon? arrghh. headache.. T-T it's so funny when they argue! hahahah.. well hope ya update soon!

Please update!

HI!

love this story...LOVE LOVE LOVE! haha, you probably get this a lot, but Vermilion rocks! but for some reason i keep on picturing Keziah as Xelloss-chan...O.O damn me. Silence sounds very intriguing...yes, indeed...write, write, write! good story! very god!

*dances around happily* You arent very subtle you know. Anywho, Keziah should "reveal" his true sex to Vermillion. Lol.

Silence somesort of dragon right?

Vermi isnt the only dragon how bout the other one in chapter one? It was black right and Vermi is red or had better be.

Stop the lame chapter names!

(Review for chapter 6)

Ok Three would be kewt with Vermi too but NO! Vermi and Kazi! FOREVER!

Three knows more than what hes letting on and Vermi knows it. Also why must Kazi and Silence be taken way it aint fair. I do wanna see a pic of Three's face when he saw Vermi change form. How funny that would be huh? I like chapter 6 its really sweet and I love the way Vermi turned to Three for the Is it prpoer for male/male conversation. And Three blushed! BTW did or dose Three have a son at one point? And I love the way he saved Silence Hes soo kewl!

Vermi is my fave thus far.

Kazi is num 2.

Three is 3rd. No pun intended!

Silence is forth! Silence knows about the missing Girls huh? Well something about them anyway.

Good work hope the others will like chapter 6 as much as i did! Chapter 7 comming soon? Hope so! Nikia! love ya!

It sounds like she's Gay and she seams to be Undead. Beleila. Is she?

Neander-tall! Homo-sapian!

Come on we all love the fluffy stuff and the night stuff is the best! So KEWT! I wanna know more on the dream and the necklace! What is its importance? I wanna know!

How kewt and sad this relationship is...

Odd huh? Keep up and add more spicy stuff will ya?

I wanna see more pic's pea's! Try one with the two in each-others arms huh?

Love your work

Nikia!

Goat again? BTW...Banana!

How could you knock Kazi out like that?

After he thinks Vermi is dead? MEAN!

Vermi? Naked? Sweet!

(Going to be anymore of that?)

Womanly man and manly woman?

Hmm...Funny you think?

Ok Vermi smells women and not the guys why? Thats how he knew Kazi was male!

OK Krantz Clem/Wang-Tang Right?

Stupid and Horny

Clem-Stupid Wang-Tang-Horny

Umm...Is Beleila bitch Gay? She act's as though she is.

Ew... *shuts eyes tight*

(NO KISSIE KISSIE!)

Vermi and Krants?

NO!

Aww poor Kazi, him thinks'es Vermi is dead. *sniff* Him love'ems him.

Pea's QUITE the lame chapter names!

Taku for good story keep it comming

Nikia

Love's you!

Um... THe chapter name is kinda LAME!

Anyway, I wanna see Vermi with wet hair! *drool* The two are so KEWT!

(KISSIE KISSIE!)

Question how dose Vermi run his hands through the dreds?

Kazi act's like a girl and he thinks he's fulling everyone its funny!

GOAT!

"We all love fluffy stuff!" ~Reika

Ok who is she? I aint liken her much right now.

Well keep it up its about the only story you have WITH a plot. Compaird to your 50,0 others and all.

Love ya

Nikia

Hai yo!

Too KEWT! Vermi sounds and looks very hott! Love your pic's. His hair looks more like dreds though maby you can change that? Kaziah? Oh yeah!*winks* Sounds a lot like a girly Cevintine though huh? I like his pic too, both are really Kewt!

Keep GOING!

Nikia!