|Reviews for What You Want To See|
| Stormer chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I totally loved reading this poem : ) I think most of us know at least one girl who fits this description *g* It was awesome. i think my fave lines were these:
"You say that what I say
is mean, pathetic and untrue.
Then you call me the names
I feel describe you."
Mostly 'cause of the nice rhythm they have. And the rhyming works really well : ) anyway, good work yet again!