Reviews for What You Want To See
Stormer chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I totally loved reading this poem : ) I think most of us know at least one girl who fits this description *g* It was awesome. i think my fave lines were these:

"You say that what I say

is mean, pathetic and untrue.

Then you call me the names

I feel describe you."

Mostly 'cause of the nice rhythm they have. And the rhyming works really well : ) anyway, good work yet again!