Ch 2 finished-

I like it, you got me hooked.

I like how self loathing she can be, while at the same time, she isn't.

And Niam is very slick.

Chapter one complete; it's well written. You have an above average grasp on literature and the composition thereof.

I'm not a huge vamp person, but it's good so far. I like.

I like it, pelase read my story It Will SUrely Come To Pass ((it is about vampires))

In correct french, the phrase would not be Viscount de Les Sables, but Viscout DES Sables. Because of and the are right next to eachother to make one word. Also, Viscount would be incorrect, it would be vicomte i believe.
-KT

This is a really awesome story. I like the character development and the time you obviousl spent in making this story come alive. It is truly amazing.
~Mel

Priceless. I wish you all the luck in getting it published. It was a manificent novel but a little slow on getting to the good parts. Next time you should let relationships like those with Janus last a touch longer. I really look forward to reading all your other work and hold tight to your home-life. Soon you will be able to leave all that behind you as all who go through something like that should but never forget, and never forgive.

Brilliant work... -Arundel

I love this story. I usually had no time to read it, but I set up a whole two hours just to read all of it. Your a very good author. How you were able to make me feel like I was watching all of the characters in action. I love this story. Review mine please? It's called Daughter of The Queen.

One word: WOW! Now, onto more words, lol. SO FAR, IT'S AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT ALL! hehe, you're gonna be the first to be on my fav. stories list. CONGRATS! lol! i've been reading TONS AND TONS of fanfics and stuff but i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY like yours. I'll be sure to check out your other stories when I'm done with this one :-D

AGh! Noooo! Must read more to find out what happened!

Ollie! It's not fair how you can write the best end sentences and no one else can! You're so skilled and talented and I really love progeny!

Ouch. That'd be pretty harsh to have your old lover warn his son against you. I like the way you finished your chapter. The words seem to flow together so beautifully.

This is really awesome RC. I love this.

Oh. My. God. A cliffhanger? Noooo! How could you do this to me? It's not fair! It was so good...and then...the end! Oh, if there is any love in your heart you'll be sure and upload the next story of Emara into Fanfic. quickly...please, oh please do. Overall, though, I'd have to say the story was marvelous. I loved it. Keep writing!

Well, you've gone and done it. You made me cry. I can't believe that this is almost the end...it can't end like this! Everything's so unfinished feeling, it's starting to feel like she's never going to get a break...But...other than that, I think you're doing a wonderful job and I can't wait till the next chapter is out! Though...I hope it's not going to make me cry...

What a tragic story. I wonder if Emara really despised becoming a vampire. Anyway, at least Chevalier got what was coming to him, the friggin bastard.