Reviews for Lamp
Meegwun chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
heh heh oh man. do i ever hate math. this haiku is goodly. the way a haiku should be - i.e. with a little twist at the end. :)
sylph paean chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
! yeah. stinky math.

-jd

p.s. is it emprisoned or imprisoned? i don't know.

p.p.s i'm being picky, i know. sorry!

p.p.p.s. you know i still love it, though.
Lami chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
aghr! math! die, lamp, die!
Princess Mulan chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
hehehe, fun ending

I really like your style
EarendilBeloved Star chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
0_o

That's really neat. A lamp is truly like the suns glistening rays glimmering down and fighting through and reflecting down from the glass in which it was captured. Like an esscence, with a glitzy core rising down on to paper from its glass thats conceals its power.

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I like your poem

Keep writing!

If chance comes maybe you could- read and reveiw a few of my poems/stories. If you want of course. i like your poem