This poem is beautiful, i loved the imagery and how it flowed. you have a lot of talent
~Kiwi

I really loved that...hi jamie lol.

I don't know if you understand my reasoning, but for some reason it seems to me as if she is settling for this "dark angel" of sorts. The way he kind of forced himself on her (not rape or anything), but I get an evil vibe from him. Whelp, that's my interpretation of it. I really thought that was great! Keep posting your poetry!

I love this one..it's so different. I think It'd really fit into Vampire Tears..maybe at the end..This one's really cool..even if it did make me cringe a little.. :-)

Yay! I love happy endings!

I love this poem. The way its written is so mysterious. Keep writing.

OB1