Thats a really sad poem! But its well written and nearly made me cry by making me think about what it would be like to lose a friend. This is a very good poem!

That is an amazing poem. It really plays havoc with your emotions... you need to take a deep breath at the end. It is simple, but the choice of words and the way they flow is excellent. The rhythm and structure help to illustrate the planed nature of their 'fall'. Well done!