Reviews for Shards of the Past
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
this is so good! i can't believe it doesn't have a review yet! ! ! the imagery is simply superb. and the metaphors and other comparisons were really terrific. there was a fantastic aura about it, kinda like being suspended while the universe spins around you. my favorite lines were: "gathering delicate lifelines in," "coax the crumbling into full life once more," and "last threads fall apart in your hand." a very captivating piece of poetry. nice work!