This is an excellent story; I can't wait to see what happens next. I like the characters, they're very...um...something. (Yeah, I have a real huge vocabulary...) I'll be watching for the next chapter. )

great job keep writing

I'm really getting into this, the characters seem really well developed. I can't wait to see where you take this...oh and thanks for reviewing Luna for me. :) Hope you continue soon, let me know when you do!

This is actually good- please continue!

This sounds like it could be interesting, I like the characters so far. Great start!

If you get a chance could you check out my story Luna? It's a fantasy as well. Thanks

And e-mail me when you update, I'd like you to continue this, it sounds interesting.