Reviews for Schoolgirl
zeli chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Hehehe... this is funny... Wonder who it's about... Love the last line. But I agree, it could be longer.
Lady of Pluto chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
lol lovely! it has a really good rhythm to it - especially "early morning, sleeping/sudden thought, creeping." the last line was awesome as well: "of slothfulness this did reek." nice work! )
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
Now, that sounds
Kari-demon chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
I can just imagine who this is about...
Aaron Downey 47 chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
it could be longer. personally i dont like school so i am out of luck. maybe yall should do some poems a bout sports like hockey.
gaggle133 chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
:D A poem I can relate to! I feel this way often :P keep up the good work