Reviews for Memorial
ISA-Sniper chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This was a good story, with a good point. Literally the only thing I can really think of to complain about is that you say the wall is black marble, but it's not: it's granite from Bangalore, Karnataka, India and it was specifically chosen for the very same reflective qualities which play such a key role in this story.

Keep up the great work.
AriadneEthereal chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
This is haunting, philosophical and, yes, very beautiful.
pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
I just can't seem to get this out of my head.

Beautiful.
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
what a wonderfully executed story. The imagery of the incomplete reflections, my personal favorite, "her form outlinded only in its incomplete form along the black panes, the names interrupting her body, her face as it approached." it's just wonderful. It vaugly reminds me Doctrow mixed with Fitzgerald.
Rob-O chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Well the story had a good meaning and it was okay. But i found it slow but thats because im into action but good job anyway.
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
Wow. This was just...powerful. Amazing. *nods*